Sun & Stars

Downloaded this VN a little while ago, and I've loved it so far. Really, and I mean really looking forward to new updates in the future. From what I've seen, this VN is incredibly unique, and an enjoyable read. I do highly recommend it. 

Past that, however, I really have no complaints. Obviously their is a typo here and there, which is fine really. The typos don't really take anything away from the VN. Moreover, they didn't muck up any conversations, so no confusion is to be had.

All around good, and fun VN. Looking forward to future updates, and the like. 

Very impressed by the start to the project! No matter what happens with the technical challenges you are facing or whatever the future of this project is, I really hope your future includes more contributions to the furry VN genre because I think you have a lot of talent and many good ideas just based on this short taste of what you have to offer

From what your described it sounds like your laptops display cable (LVDS) is breaking and the internal storage is reaching end of life / bad RAM. It is urgent you backup anything important as it sounds like your laptop will fail very soon.

ngl getting scolded by Josh's father felt relatable, I actually FELT that, and wanted to tear up. Loved the update! 

Also a quick tip to remembering the difference of your and you're

Your = Something that belongs to you (e.g. your bag, this is yours)

You're = You are (e.g. you're handsome, you're so funny)

just something I noticed in your vn and thought to give a little tip in remembering which one to use. I basically made a game to count how many "your" and "you're" are used in the wrong way haha no offense.

loved this new update, the comedy is peak and love all the interactions and funny art

This will be a bit of a long comment !💆‍♀️👌

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This VN is genuinely great, I highly recommend giving it a try. I've been following the development since day one, I believe. And it's such a fun read, I love the way they just openly break the fourth wall. The fact that once the author or even the literal plot gets brought into the conversation, they all just agree and move on... like immediately.

And the fact that I feel so included in the culture that's being showed is great. Loving it. 💕

Sending the author, Neo Neon a wonderful day. (❁´◡`❁)

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(... Now, Below this, There will be spoilers and some bits of the story getting mentioned here and there, as of now, I will take into account only the shown story. Which is the entirety of the very first update as of me typing this right now.)😍

Oh Joshua, I feel for him. That moment with his father made me feel so much. I just hope we can somehow get out of that situation...😭

Now, in another more 'theorizing' mood, I am inclined to believe that the guys that were shown/introduced through a beautiful image, Those being, Kyle, Ethan and Richard, will maybe be Joshua's love interests?/maybe... 

I am also still very unsure if the VN will end up following a more dark path, or maybe a more cheerful adventure... 

In another mood... I'd be great if Joshua fights his father and wins... Maybe... idk if its my need of bloodshed talking.🙀

Also, in a more unrelated note, loved the little 'trivia' momento. This VN has such enormous potential to be... tragic, lighthearted, romantic, happy, sad, eventful and much much more. 

Genuinely delighted to have discovered it in such early development.

⭐🌟✨🌟⭐

Very fun read and looking forward to future updates. 

I quite like the balance between serious moments and humor. 

bit of spoilers below. tread with caution if you have not read sun and stars

Damn i did not expect Josh's father to be such a hoe

Ahhh I just finished reading chapter 1 and love it. Ohhh seeing how cruel Josh's father to Joshua remind me my own parents too. Super strict, abusive, and controlling it's not uncommon things in Asia, and I can related to Joshua feels in the story, god spare my feelings author TwT. 

Next thing, well we just got new character in game too yaaaayy :D (I assume Ethan, Kyle and Richard is gonna be our future boyfie OwO) I hope to more of interesting character and story in the future. Nice 'Trivia Time' it's pretty engaging and informative for the reader, well it's not much but I'm not gonna complain it's just trivia after all lol. Another great works from the author :3

De la Cruz? Sánchez? Those last names are common where I live. If this thing is from Philippines, why these last names in specific?

* Reads the trivia time. *

Oh! That's why. XD

Anyway I just love the humor and the story in this visual novel. I'll wait patiently for next updates. Thank you very much =3

The story so far is engaging, and putting both the English and Filipino side-by-side helps us understand what the words mean in our language.

There are still some typos in your words, mostly the words "your" and "you're". Sorry, but my copyediting skills get to me (unless intended).

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Even if it may take about a year or two, I'll be waiting.

(P.S.: I didn't know Gebbous proofread your VN. What a great honor. I wish I could help you in any other way, Neon. Keep it up!
P.S.S.: I'm broke too.)

Finally got around to reading this and i can't wait for more updates in future

I still find random pictures from this novel in my gallery lol

This is the most relatable and funny vn ever as a pinoy, and the fact that my name is also Josh irl makes it even better LOL! 

AWESOME WORK!!! LOVE THE ARTSTYLE :3

I had a blast playing this game genuinely 😭😭 this game is so fun omg, and the character designs are so good, looking forward the next update !!

Uyyy Philippines 😭

KAGIGIL HAHAHA 10/10 FVN

Sooooooo fing CUTE love it!

Nice VN, its so funny and fun! And you're being a troll with that moaning sound made me roll on the floor and wheeze out loud, you little rascal!!! The characters are fun and easy to follow along. and I love that you share filipino food and culture in the mix. I look forward seeing more in the future. 😀

UYYYY PIPINO!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Peak pinoy core comedy fr

Love the story so far keep up the great work I really do love it especially all the small spelling errors it adds carecter to it I really do like that not sarcasam :3

OMGOMGOMG WAIT THIS IS SO GOOD STAAHHHPPP 

pls never change 💖💖💖 cannot wait for next update

This is so fuckign good!!! I love slice of life/school vn's.  Even if it has spelling mistakes, I loved it and laughed a lot. 

Thanks. I'll wait patiently for another update.

=)

Not the max volume incident 😭😭😭😭😭

I think we've all had that core memory of opening up our friends link into that sound!!

DAMN WHY CANT I GO FOR RAYMOND

I am SUCH a sucker for his type of character, and right from the start he broke my heart 😭

i really liked the demo. AND it didn’t require an apology for being “too long” cause it was a bit too short if you ask me. I love the chemistry between chars, i ESPECIALLY love the fact that straight dudes are just joking around and have fun about gay being gay. It’s so relaxing

And jokes, i like your jokes. The whole scene with “boys, i like boys, i am flaming homosexual and am proud” got me hysterical. Especially “WHEEEZE” thing xD

anyway i sincerely wish you luck with that project, im looking forward to reading more. Even though my crush if already taken 🫠🫠

Also about misspellings: there ARE a bunch of them but that fact added to the charm of the vn x)

Another god tier comedy FVN. REALLY LOVE FOR MORE NEW UPDATE <3

Not really like for sound jumpscare tho 😭😭

Really liked this demo! The art is really cute and it's really cool detail explaining what the food. There are some spelling mistakes like in the cafeteria part changing 'leash' to 'liege' but aside from that it's pretty well written. Keep up the good work! :D 

Rare to see Philippines fvn but love it!!💕💕✨

yo pinoy BGs